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Old 03-01-2006, 12:26 PM   #1
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Forever (new poetry from myself)

Forever
Hail the grayest days
Pain and burden swept away
Sense the bleakest hour
Sense it claiming all your power
Feel the cold air blow warm
Feel your body go numb
From the tips of your feet to the top of your thumb
See the deserted streets along the shore
See them deserted forevermore
Be here, see here
Feel in your heart, see in the fear
Loyalty still you feel
Even if it’s not really real
Trust you rarely give
That’s no kind of way to live
See in someone, be in someone
Don’t leave, don’t run
Forever friendships won’t go away
They will last through any day
No matter who steps in
…I will win…
The wind will blow my way
The wind bringing with it the day
Burden bear, the once clean air
My heart still beats unfair
Grayness sticks with those who fight
Fight them, fight them with all your might
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They say no man’s an island but I tend to disagree
I guess they’ve never seen my island,
And where it lies at sea
A wounded man sounds desperate when he’s lost all his belief
Can you look into my eyes and say you won’t betray me

Tabula Rasa from The Dark Poet!
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Old 03-01-2006, 05:39 PM   #2
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Re: Forever (new poetry from myself)

friendships are forever awsome work precioussssssss i like the last lines fight theme fight with all your might
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Old 03-02-2006, 04:05 AM   #3
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Re: Forever (new poetry from myself)

Hail the grayest days
Pain and burden swept away
Sense the bleakest hour
Sense it claiming all your power

I love it!
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Old 03-02-2006, 12:04 PM   #4
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Re: Forever (new poetry from myself)

Thank you, I have more but lately I have been very busy.... God how things can happen so fast, everything is a blur, all I have left is my writing and I am working on a poetry book Destined Journey as well, it has I guess about 25 pieces of poetry, I just have to get it published, as well as I have lost my best friend, my computer, my phone, I'm using the school computer, life at the moment, sucks.... I feel like that line in What's This Life For "I see your soul, it's kinda gray, you see my heart you look away, you see my wrists I know your pain, I know your purpose on your plane"
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They say no man’s an island but I tend to disagree
I guess they’ve never seen my island,
And where it lies at sea
A wounded man sounds desperate when he’s lost all his belief
Can you look into my eyes and say you won’t betray me

Tabula Rasa from The Dark Poet!
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Old 03-03-2006, 12:20 PM   #5
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Re: Forever (new poetry from myself)

Damn Girl I Know It, i keep about a lot folders all oranaized and place for everything and everything in its place, its best just to stay calm and you will find it and keep it organized
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