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Old 12-01-2004, 01:34 PM   #1
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1:53 am. Tuesday, 04

I was up late writing these and they just came to me like crazy. My favorite is the first one. The times on here are the ending times of the writings. Enjoy.

1:53 am. Tuesday, 04

Stranded in darkness
and now I'm crying for help amongst this pain
But I fear my cries fall short of you
Oh, God, I'm so scared of falling through the cracks and decaying here
I'm taken back by the way I despise this darkness
Please take me Home
Oh, God, I'm so scared
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1:59 am. Tuesday, 04

My lungs cease to inhale
and my heart is broken for you
Take me in my brokeness
Lay me down beside you
Lay me down to sleep forever.
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2:03 am. Tuesday, 04

I'm not a murderer
that blood on my hands is just cover up
for the way i wanted us to be
to love only me
Was it too much to ask to have you remain faithfull?
I'm not a murderer
your blood is just for memories.
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2:12 am. Tuesday, 04

Self made prison, caged in by fear
When fear is the only thing keeping me here
And I'm too afraid to let go
Too afraid of what I don't know
Slit my wrists and hold to this cold cage
When it doesn't feel time to turn another page
Lets hold our breath until theres nothing left
Because I beleive with everything I am
I will die alone or never die at all.
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Old 12-01-2004, 06:31 PM   #2
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Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything
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Old 12-01-2004, 07:21 PM   #3
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Quote: I was up late writing these and they just came to me like crazy.

sometimes that's how it happens...
like the idea of using the time notation...
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Old 12-01-2004, 10:33 PM   #4
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those rocked!
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Old 12-02-2004, 11:36 PM   #5
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