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wow...I cant believe its over....Creed was the reason I started writing and playing guitar so this hurts...anywayz,here is my newest and maybe my last...we shall see..the newsletter will be out within the next week...there is alot of new junk on it,enjoy this until then,thank you all for your support,prayers, and love. You all rock
Held ©2004 I dance upon the flames as I'm burning I watch as the tide is slowly turning Listening to the voiceless trying to scream And the hollow trying to let their lights beam I feel so stupid listening to the nothingness speak And watching as I devour the broken and weak I've been holding to the broken promises far too long Take what you can get because I'm fading fast I'm here now, but I know that wont last Darkness is taking me down to my hell again Where I cant feel your touch on my skin I need that touch to keep me going strong I'm was once me, but I've been me way too long I've been holding to the broken promises close to me I've got nothing else to hold to to because Im empty I need to find a place to myself alone Somewhere like home I want to feel your lips on mine I want to leave this all behind To feel the touch of you Is all I need to make it through But I cant feel you in my arms And that brings me harm Because I want to die When you're not by my side. ©Stuff This Good Dont Need Titles Publishing Inc. 2004
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06-04-2004, 11:35 PM
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Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything
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1st and 3rd paragraphs are the strongest I believe. Simply, another good one.
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Thanks alot Kim!!!
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Nice work, Mr.Seeker. LOVE that opening stanza!
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Thanks!
The reason the newletter isnt out yet,for those wondering, is because I have around 40 new writings to put on it,yes I said 40. Hahaha, actually Im thinking there is more like 45....crazy
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WOW, you have been a writing machine, dude! Way to go.
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Oh Boyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy
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hahahaha,thanks...yea, ya gotta right like crazy. its like Mark said,hehe. but yea,i still am writing and am not getting it out. So Im sorry...
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Ok i will live
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