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Old 07-10-2004, 11:59 PM   #1
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Fake

Hey guys i dont know whats wrong with me i cant seem to write anything i think this on sucks but tell me what you think.thanx



Fake is a word we use when something is'nt real.
Who are we to say if somethings real or if it's fake.
how can we know?who are we too say if love is fake
or real?!you just can't deal with it that i love you.
you just can't take it that someone really does care
for you.i want to be with you.you can't stand that you
love me too that you care so much it hurts to be away.
but you wish to be away.you know im good for you.you
know i make you smile.you know thats what you do for me.
you make me happy to be alive but now that your gone i wish
i was gone from this world.so everyday i wake up and put on
my happy face.I go out into a world where there is no escape.
we are stuck here to live out this life we dont want.
we live a life that dosent even make us smile not
even for a little while.If anything is fake its happiness
my happiness.I pretend im fine I pretend im great but i must
suffer my fate that i will not be able to be happy untill
you and me is whats real and not this fake happiness i put on
everyday.
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Old 07-11-2004, 06:07 AM   #2
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that was a real home Run
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Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything
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Old 07-11-2004, 02:13 PM   #3
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thanx creedsister you rock thank you for reading!
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Old 07-11-2004, 02:26 PM   #4
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Very good HR! liked it alot.
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Old 07-11-2004, 08:55 PM   #5
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thanx rulesdontapply
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