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11-16-2005, 11:11 AM | #1 |
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one step away from death
and I see the light embrace of violence brought me to the night and I do regret couldn't see between right and wrong never understood I'm not singing that song never saw I was giving myself to something I'm not and now I see you in there and I'm not sure whether to call you a hungry violence seeker but I care enough to know you are not like them and I want to tell you this what you join is what you'll be and I want to feel your relief because you still have a chance to change this in yourself lets disembrace the dark lets understand the light we shell not sell ourselves to violence and to his hunger and we will be safe again
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11-16-2005, 02:31 PM | #2 |
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i loved the entire piece k One Step away from death always a great opening And i see the light embrace the Viloence and also another word could be used in place of Viloence , still very well written, could,nt see between the right and wrong never understood im not singing that song Never Saw I was giving myself to something im not and now i see you in there and im not surre whether to call you , i care enough to know your not like theme and i want to tell you this what you join is what you will be, AWSOME Misseeker
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i wanna point out wrting advice haaaaaaaaaaaaaaa and i cant spell sure right haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
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I Indeed Babtize you with water BUT ONE Mightier Than I Cometh The Latchet Of Whose Shoes I,am Not Worthy To Unloose He Shall Babtize You With The Holy Ghost And With FIREEEEEEEEEE John The Babtist You Never Count Your Money When YOUR Sittin At The Table There Will Be Time Enough To Count,em When The Dealings Done |
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