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Keeping it simple
Sometime today I fell away Swear I could feel you in the wind Swear I could feel you in me Closing my eyes I realize You may be gone But it aint for long Blowing my way The sun starts to fade But I know Won't ever be alone Grass between my toes Air in which I breath This love I feel All thanks to you The sun has set...oh Catch my breath Saying goodbye, for now Is the best
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Re: Keeping it simple
very venting and reflecting and all that stuff
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well from the start to the ending all i can say it was very very very well written nothing not a thing was missing from that piece as HARDCORE as it was it ended real simple Ok just perfect
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thank u!
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yes i thought it could use good feed back..
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as do all good poems.
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yes indeed my point excaltey you,ve got some good potery going on worth elboarating
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heh, i would someday like to start a band. but i dunno if i sound good when i sing. i really just wan't to get these, "songs", out there. I call them songs, i write them with the music in mind.
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thats the way i write to the music is always in the head always someday i may to haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa my friend its a big part of my life but not a lot of room for it if that makes any sense
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it makes perfect sense. i know exactly what you mean.
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thanks for understanding man here latley i,ve been on a roll got it in my head have,nt a lot of time to even put stuff to paper
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hmmmm, try carrying around a small note pad. the size that fits in your pocket. so when somthing just comes to you, you can just quckly write it down and put it back in your pocket, to finish it later. just some advise - i do it.
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i do but normally i have a complexty i have a tendies when i start something i just cant give 25 percent of it and get to the rest later i gotta give 100 percent all the time, the same thing when wrting down lyrics now if it real good oh you bet your fanny i,ll write it on my jeans if i have to haaaaaaa
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yes, i've experienced that to. maybe just try to clear your scheduel up a bit? that might help, if you can.
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