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12-04-2003, 10:35 PM
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Downfall, trapped in a cycle
blamed for everything The raw and untamed break way to suffering Lifeless, we act on a moment Freedom, and illusion Taken for granted, left listless in the world trampled on, are the ones who are given the mistaken identity left behind, blending into the shadows. wanting more, but outwardly conent with the bottom of the barrel. why do let them walk over you? Lifeless, we act on a moment Freedom, and illusion Taken for granted, left listless in the world trampled on, are the ones who are given the mistaken identity Its time to fight back, regain the name, your society took away. Bring what you have, show us all, show us your true colors no more hiding in the wall |
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12-04-2003, 10:58 PM
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Good
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12-04-2003, 11:03 PM
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Again the world sucks,,,Good stuff iced
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Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything 
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12-05-2003, 09:07 PM
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Great stuff, Iced...I really liked this line:
left behind, blending into the shadows. wanting more, but outwardly conent Many times I have felt this way.
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12-06-2003, 01:45 AM
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cool like the poem, very true, very true
yes, creedsister, at times life is wicked. and I just can't see the light a silver lining sometimes isn't enough to make some wrong seem right... I could just keep going but I won't, even though for some reason I want to.
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12-06-2003, 11:25 AM
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i know it does,,but as long as we dont give up we may feel like were dying at times,,but as long as we keepgoing on,, were going to make it if give up we die,,peace
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Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything
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Nice!
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