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Old 02-18-2006, 09:07 AM   #1
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Reason To Be

I'm going away from me
I want to find love
but am I only dreaming
noone hears me
so I'm screaming

everything I wanted to find
lays out of my reach
I'm a prisoner to this world
encaptured in this sleep
that sometimes goes to deep

lost in these lies
I waste myself another day
disbelief taking over me
so sure there's nothing left
no reason to be

will what I feel
ever rise to the surface
will I ever show my real skin
will this ever be real
'cause all we have lies within
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Old 02-21-2006, 05:02 AM   #2
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Re: Reason To Be

Well written, I escpecially liked:

will what I feel
ever rise to the surface
will I ever show my real skin
will this ever be real
'cause all we have lies within
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Old 02-21-2006, 11:31 PM   #3
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Re: Reason To Be

encaptured in this sleep that sometimes goes too deep well written i just loved the entire thing
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