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Old 05-05-2004, 01:50 AM   #1
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If
If I could I would
Do my part
Open my heart
Stoke the fire
Unleash my desire
If I could

If I could I would
Play the card
Let down my guard
Crash the wall
Answer the call
If I could

If I could I would
Cast the line
Claim what is mine
Live the dream
Capture the sunbeam
If I could

If I could I would
Proudly stand
Accept your hand
Fill the hole
Complete my soul
But I can’t
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Old 05-05-2004, 03:51 AM   #2
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well written,,,
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Old 05-05-2004, 08:20 AM   #3
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Quote: (Originally Posted by creedsister) well written,,,

yep well written, it has a good structure to it.
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Old 05-05-2004, 12:06 PM   #4
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Wow. I really really like that one. I want it to be longer. Why can't the writer claim what is thiers? What holds them back?
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Old 05-05-2004, 01:18 PM   #5
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Quote: (Originally Posted by Aimee) Wow. I really really like that one. I want it to be longer. Why can't the writer claim what is thiers? What holds them back?
I dont know Aim, but i bet its a loooong story
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Old 05-05-2004, 02:20 PM   #6
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Hahahah, yeah, you could say that, creedsister ...Thanks for the kind words, you guys.
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Old 05-05-2004, 08:45 PM   #7
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beautiful writing, dogstar...know the feeling...altho, there is always hope...ya think?...one can always have that...
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Old 05-05-2004, 09:23 PM   #8
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Quote: (Originally Posted by Aimee) Why can't the writer claim what is thiers? What holds them back?
Not enough lime in da Corona!!
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Old 05-05-2004, 10:47 PM   #9
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Quote: (Originally Posted by Ann Allusion) beautiful writing, dogstar...know the feeling...altho, there is always hope...ya think?...one can always have that...
HaHa like martin luther king said,,,LETS KEEP HOPE ALIVE
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Old 05-05-2004, 11:31 PM   #10
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Quote: (Originally Posted by TeriB19) Not enough lime in da Corona!!

Hehehehehehe...

Ann, yeah, I still have hope...sometimes . Glad you enjoyed it, though
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