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Old 05-29-2005, 09:10 PM   #1
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Random Feelings

The emptiness of my voice
calling to anyone.
The memories of a life
that i wanna make back.
Feeling lonely in the
darkness of this body.
I just wanna go and
dont coming back

If for a minute
i could be there.
I would do things
in a different way
no hellos and no good byes.
Lossing myself in the memories.
Missing those streets at night.

Missing someone in my way
i found another instead.
I wanna go and dont coming back.
I wanna lose myself
in those memories
in those streets at night.
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Old 05-29-2005, 10:34 PM   #2
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there is just something about those street lights i liked it Gabs
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Old 05-29-2005, 11:07 PM   #3
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thanks sister...those streets are NYC streets. i miss that city. the poem in general means all my feelings about i wanna leave this city and start again.
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Old 05-30-2005, 03:10 AM   #4
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nice writing, Trimontana.
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In sleep he sang to me, in dreams he came
That voice which calls to me and speaks my name
And do I dream again, for now I find
The phantom of the opera is there...inside my mind

Christine/ Phantom Of The Opera


Abondon thought and let the dream decend....
Point of No Return/Phantom Of The Opera


You will forever remain the music
And I…the song you sing
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Old 05-30-2005, 10:05 AM   #5
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Thanks Ann
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Old 05-31-2005, 01:38 PM   #6
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that was wonderful!
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The music in my head loud...
Joyful noises sound...
Happiness surrounds...
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