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03-13-2004, 03:13 PM
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Tell me what u think
Jeany's Garden
A never ending of flowers abroad Up high in the Heavens Where the lights intensity shines bright The aura of pontency from the Omnipotent Scattered lights and souls of the beauty slumber The clouds like Jade of its own from the sea The panorama was revealed by an Angel Layered was the soul of one Golden hair was her mind of luster Jade eyes was her sea of imagery Her own flesh devoured the cradle that mounted from hell to its own reign The falls of waters of pearls manipulated the very one soul Her own flesh was gold buring in her heart Unfurling and expansion of the brightest, glorious light in Heaven |
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03-13-2004, 10:02 PM
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That was good SmEeKy
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03-13-2004, 11:40 PM
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i liked it too really sweet
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03-14-2004, 03:01 AM
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thanks u guys
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04-12-2004, 05:14 PM
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that was deep and very beautiful!
*snaps* snaps for you, a real poet! |
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04-13-2004, 02:22 PM
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that was beautiful.. if I had to choose my fave part (very difficult to do), it would be this part...
Her own flesh devoured the cradle that mounted from hell to its own reign The falls of waters of pearls manipulated the very one soul
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04-20-2004, 06:51 PM
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thanks I didnt know it was that good
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05-04-2004, 01:05 PM
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Again Smeeky...your talent is incrediable...I loved it
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05-06-2004, 12:19 AM
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thank u goddess
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Good poem! Wish I could write like that, but I can't write worth a squat!
 Keep up the good work!
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05-09-2004, 12:21 AM
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oh Im sure u can
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