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12-09-2003, 01:58 PM
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Deep Inside
I never thought i would ever know or feel the presence
of the power of saddness Deep inside which never subsides. I feel like a mole in a hole underground,slow,in darkness the cold inside never subsides. lost is the power of happiness and spirit. in the morning when i wake my spirit screams why didnt you dissapate love what you have before its to late.
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12-09-2003, 05:54 PM
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yeap i can relate to all that stuff,,cant seem to get away from it,,but i dont think its ever to late,,by the way killer poem,,,
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12-10-2003, 11:58 AM
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Great poem, mushroomy2k.
 I can definitely relate.
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12-10-2003, 09:10 PM
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Yea, its good
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12-10-2003, 09:40 PM
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Wow, I can definitely relate to that! Great poem by the way!
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12-11-2003, 08:14 AM
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thanks everyone i tried not as good as all of yours but gave it a shot.
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12-11-2003, 09:51 AM
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well i liked reading theme just like anybody else,s,,and they kinda touched me too,,keep em coming,,peace
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It was as good! Great poem. Keep posting!
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12-14-2003, 12:16 AM
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It was great! What are you talking about you just gave it a shot? I liked it!
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12-14-2003, 11:14 PM
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Me too! Especially this part...
in the morning when i wake my spirit screams
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