the vase

metalanus · 06-15-2006, 12:12 AM

based on a short story called odor of chrysanthemums

flowers on the floor
fallen from a broken vase
knocked off in a hurried rush
to deliver the news of a tragic death

round like a womb
sustaining life inside
shattered in an instant
leaving sharp edges behind

she looks into the mirror
knowing its the end
the child inside has died
with the odor of chrysantheums

who will be the man
to peice her together again
who will be the man
to place his seed in her

noone

Rocketqueen · 06-16-2006, 02:18 AM

interesting

bilal · 07-06-2006, 11:56 AM

hmmm...nice comparision of the vase though....but should;nt she be worried about the loss rather than who will be the man.........i guess it has to do with the context of the book u refered that i dont know about....hmmmm

Rocketqueen · 08-28-2006, 12:37 AM

Quote: (Originally Posted by bilal) hmmm...nice comparision of the vase though....but should;nt she be worried about the loss rather than who will be the man.........i guess it has to do with the context of the book u refered that i dont know about....hmmmm

This Piece Of Potery Is Missing A Lot Of Pieces i think and the time of the wrting was kinda off but not much using that book was great idea i think It Worked Context is all good ....AMEN AND AMEN

06-15-2006, 12:12 AM	#1
metalanus USER INFO » Status: Broken Dream Posts: 168 Joined: Aug 2005 Currently: Offline	the vase based on a short story called odor of chrysanthemums flowers on the floor fallen from a broken vase knocked off in a hurried rush to deliver the news of a tragic death round like a womb sustaining life inside shattered in an instant leaving sharp edges behind she looks into the mirror knowing its the end the child inside has died with the odor of chrysantheums who will be the man to peice her together again who will be the man to place his seed in her noone

06-16-2006, 02:18 AM	#2
Rocketqueen USER INFO » Status: Freedom Fighter Posts: 2,432 Joined: Oct 2005 Currently: Offline	Re: the vase interesting __________________ I Indeed Babtize you with water BUT ONE Mightier Than I Cometh The Latchet Of Whose Shoes I,am Not Worthy To Unloose He Shall Babtize You With The Holy Ghost And With FIREEEEEEEEEE John The Babtist You Never Count Your Money When YOUR Sittin At The Table There Will Be Time Enough To Count,em When The Dealings Done

07-06-2006, 11:56 AM	#3
bilal USER INFO » Status: Said Eyes Posts: 4,615 Joined: Feb 2006 Currently: Offline	Re: the vase hmmm...nice comparision of the vase though....but should;nt she be worried about the loss rather than who will be the man.........i guess it has to do with the context of the book u refered that i dont know about....hmmmm __________________ ~~~AB-III~~~ You Should Never Come This Way To Test The Hands Of Fate You Don't Belong Here

08-28-2006, 12:37 AM	#4
Rocketqueen USER INFO » Status: Freedom Fighter Posts: 2,432 Joined: Oct 2005 Currently: Offline	Re: the vase Quote: (Originally Posted by bilal) hmmm...nice comparision of the vase though....but should;nt she be worried about the loss rather than who will be the man.........i guess it has to do with the context of the book u refered that i dont know about....hmmmm This Piece Of Potery Is Missing A Lot Of Pieces i think and the time of the wrting was kinda off but not much using that book was great idea i think It Worked Context is all good ....AMEN AND AMEN __________________ I Indeed Babtize you with water BUT ONE Mightier Than I Cometh The Latchet Of Whose Shoes I,am Not Worthy To Unloose He Shall Babtize You With The Holy Ghost And With FIREEEEEEEEEE John The Babtist You Never Count Your Money When YOUR Sittin At The Table There Will Be Time Enough To Count,em When The Dealings Done

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