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Old 06-01-2004, 11:41 PM   #1
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Erase Me

You may think you’re free
You may think you’re done with me
You may think we’re over now
You may think you’ve won somehow

You can try to erase me
But I am etched behind your eyes
There is no way you can shake me

I will stalk you in your sleep
I will cut your heart for keeps
I will cloud your sunny skies
I will expose your filthy lies

You can try to erase me
But I am etched behind your eyes
There is no way you can take me

You still hear me when she whispers
You still feel me when you touch her
You still taste me when she kisses you
You still say my name when she’s through

You can try to erase me
But I am etched behind your eyes
There is no way you can forsake me
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Old 06-02-2004, 01:38 AM   #2
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Wow, yet another great one by Kerri. It's a very true poem too.
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"...My beaten heart is in your hands, What I really need is shelter, And a chance to relearn love, Teach me all over, All over to relearn love, Show me again, So I can relearn love, The comfort of your arms around me, Your tender hands caress my head, I lay beside you, I'm not worthy..."
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Old 06-02-2004, 11:57 AM   #3
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very true indeed Dogstar, I Loved it Way To Gooooooooooooo, Clap Clap Clap
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Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything
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Old 06-02-2004, 12:07 PM   #4
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Thanks, you guys!
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Old 06-02-2004, 04:27 PM   #5
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AWESOME, but what else could we expect when it comes to Kerri writing poems. As always, Kerri your words took me. Your emotion is raw and powerful. Thank you again for sharing your talent.
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Old 06-03-2004, 12:28 AM   #6
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Raw is the word.
Wow girl.
Very honest, very confronting.
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Old 06-03-2004, 12:35 AM   #7
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Awww, thanks you guys...Sincirr, I tend to be in-your-face at times, hehehe....
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Old 06-03-2004, 10:10 AM   #8
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*writes down note saying don't mess with women like kerri*
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She never told a lie,
Well, might of told a lie.
But never lived one.
Didn’t have a life.
Didn’t have a life.
But surely saved one.
Alright, now it’s time for us to let you go.

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Old 06-03-2004, 11:43 AM   #9
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Quote: (Originally Posted by handmedown) *writes down note saying don't mess with women like kerri*

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Old 06-05-2004, 11:56 PM   #10
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whoever you wrote that about knows not to mess with you! another gr8 poem!
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