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If I could I would
Do my part Open my heart Stoke the fire Unleash my desire If I could If I could I would Play the card Let down my guard Crash the wall Answer the call If I could If I could I would Cast the line Claim what is mine Live the dream Capture the sunbeam If I could If I could I would Proudly stand Accept your hand Fill the hole Complete my soul But I can’t
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well written,,,
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yep well written, it has a good structure to it. |
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Wow. I really really like that one. I want it to be longer. Why can't the writer claim what is thiers? What holds them back?
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I dont know Aim, but i bet its a loooong story
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Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything |
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Hahahah, yeah, you could say that, creedsister ...Thanks for the kind words, you guys.
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beautiful writing, dogstar...know the feeling...altho, there is always hope...ya think?...one can always have that...
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Not enough lime in da Corona!!
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HaHa like martin luther king said,,,LETS KEEP HOPE ALIVE
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Hehehehehehe... Ann, yeah, I still have hope...sometimes . Glad you enjoyed it, though
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