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08-21-2004, 04:25 PM | #1 |
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Each word strikes With venomous precision Painful thoughts linger Digging up visions Making it hard to let go of the past It’s almost as if You want it to last As if reason Forgot to rhyme Demanding repayment Of some petty crime As if forgiveness Passes all understanding Is met with a silence That’s less than commanding These eyes look forward There’s better tomorrows Life’s darkest days filled With love…lost their sorrows Yet, in your words the shadows are cast It’s almost as if You want it to last In your words…my old friend... The shadows are cast As if it’s too hard To let go of the past….. ©2004 Susan D. a little something about these lyrics...lets just say, they were inspired by my latest attempt to listen to AB...technically...they are great, all the way around...will always wish them the best...but those lyrics, just push my buttons.. ~peace Last edited by Ann Allusion : 08-21-2004 at 04:28 PM. |
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Awsome It was one of those that make ya think
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thinking can be a good thing...
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Hahaha
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LOL, well, your words were an interesting way to express the above sentiment ...As usual, nicely done!
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