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Old 07-07-2004, 08:36 PM   #1
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All i can take

Verse 1

I lie,
I fake,
I lose the race.

I try,
to win,
But I have to much pain within

I fight,
and scream,
as if in a dream.

I kill,
I die,
You take what is mine.

CHORUS

All the things I take,
habits never break,
Risk for no one's sake.
Its more than I can take.

And I...I...I...

(guitar and drum transition to 2nd verse)

Verse 2

Things to
consume.
My mind's a dark room.
I am
Confused.
But I've nothing to lose.
I see,
your face.
The mind's a scary place.
You try,
To replace my love
with hate.

CHORUS

Verse 3

Isn't it wrong?
'Cause it sure ain't right.
All these things you've done.
Just kill my life.
Never was it this way.
I tried to make you stay.
But...

Chorus (slow, w/o music, w/vocal background)
Guitar and drum solos

CHORUS 2*

Last edited by jbjfan : 07-11-2004 at 12:08 AM.
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Old 07-07-2004, 11:42 PM   #2
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I felt that one jbjf Awsome!!!!
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Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything
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