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Receiving
Receiving Washing over me Like an ocean wave I feel the pressure of the flow As I come out on top Gasping for air…breathless My heart beating as if It might explode in my chest I feel alive… Thousands of butterflies have Taken off at once Looking for escape Breaking the barrier…emerging From fingertips… The beat of their wings Gently reset the cadence of my heart I watch them become invisible Disappearing into the night sky Then within moments… Become stars… Twinkling in the velvet darkness… Footlights marking the way home ©2005 All rights reserved Susan D.
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In sleep he sang to me, in dreams he came That voice which calls to me and speaks my name And do I dream again, for now I find The phantom of the opera is there...inside my mind Christine/ Phantom Of The Opera Abondon thought and let the dream decend.... Point of No Return/Phantom Of The Opera You will forever remain the music And I…the song you sing Last edited by Ann Allusion : 08-28-2005 at 01:27 AM. |
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08-28-2005, 09:39 AM
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WOW! Thats such a beautiful poem. I visualized it all in my mind. Its an amazing work of art, I really love it. It makes me feel like there is still hope out there
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08-28-2005, 03:26 PM
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yes of course it brings me hope to ..SmEeKy of the light that is bright as the memorys of both darkness and light reflict up on us as the darkness turns to day Ann As Always Another Amazing Writing ..i whatch theme become invisble Diappering into the night sky then within moments become stars twinkling in the velvet darkness foot lights marking the way home Awsome ? leaves me to wonder what speciale kind of such butterflies become stars ? Precious Potery  : Da Great Job!!!!
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Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything
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08-29-2005, 05:09 PM
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Thank you both for the kind replies...i'm so glad that you both were able to get some personal meaning out of it...as for what "special" kind of butterflies become "stars" in the sky...when you see them...you will know...
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In sleep he sang to me, in dreams he came That voice which calls to me and speaks my name And do I dream again, for now I find The phantom of the opera is there...inside my mind Christine/ Phantom Of The Opera Abondon thought and let the dream decend.... Point of No Return/Phantom Of The Opera You will forever remain the music And I…the song you sing |
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08-29-2005, 09:58 PM
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your welcome
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Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything
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