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Old 04-21-2004, 03:10 AM   #1
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Somthing new just for you!

The Hate Song
"I dont feel like myself,I havent for a while
Havent shown some happiness or even a small smile
Ever since you broke my heart in two
I havent been able to stop thinking about you
Im dried of tears, been crying too long
Twisting myself apart because you're gone

Kisses,they burn
This lesson,I'll learn
To never trust again
Been burnt by my so called friend

You're tearing apart my insides,Im trying to stay strong
But you've been tearing me limb from limb all along
I wish I could hold you to tell you how much I hate you
I wish I could scold you just as bad as you did me too
Hold you in my arms only to drop you to the ground
Cover your lips only for you never to make another sound

Hugs,they crush me
Your beauty,so ugly
The fire that still burned
The lesson I never learned."

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Old 04-21-2004, 12:37 PM   #2
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I liked the first line
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Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything
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Old 04-21-2004, 08:21 PM   #3
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Yea,sorry. This is my emo stuff coming out.(i hate emo!!!!) Better Off Dead,Released and some others are my harder roots,so stay tuned to the newsletter.
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Old 04-21-2004, 09:36 PM   #4
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I cant wait seeks
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Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything
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Cool man! I always like to read your poems. Really emotional.
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"...My beaten heart is in your hands, What I really need is shelter, And a chance to relearn love, Teach me all over, All over to relearn love, Show me again, So I can relearn love, The comfort of your arms around me, Your tender hands caress my head, I lay beside you, I'm not worthy..."
Relearn Love~Scott Stapp
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