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Old 11-29-2006, 01:50 AM   #1
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Mistress of Midnight

Mistress of Midnight

The busy signal keeps ringing in his ear
He knows she won’t answer, but he dials incessantly
Pushing the buttons until his fingers go numb
He swallows hard, the rage bubbling up to choke him

In the dream they rule the skies hand in hand
Dipping the bread, sipping the wine
They ride the wind and kiss the clouds
Higher and higher they soar on the wings of Icarus

He awakens just before the plunge
Shivering and bathed in sweat, unable to focus
In a daze he fumbles for her golden locks
But all he grabs is dead air

It’s me or her, she demands
The angel in white or the mistress of midnight
He takes longer than he should to choose
Now it’s too late as she wriggles out of his grasp

Here’s to us, he mumbles as he raises the glass
He guzzles desperately to fill the hole rotting what’s left of his senses
Sufficiently numb, he drifts into the void
As her ultimatum pounds his brain

In the dream they rule the skies hand in hand
Dipping the bread, sipping the wine
They ride the wind and kiss the clouds
Higher and higher they soar on the wings of Icarus
Until they fall no more
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Old 11-29-2006, 08:45 PM   #2
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Re: Mistress of Midnight

how can she do this ....

very very nice stuff...i loved this one....

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Old 11-29-2006, 08:52 PM   #3
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Re: Mistress of Midnight

Thanks much, bilal
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Old 11-30-2006, 08:54 PM   #4
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Re: Mistress of Midnight

Great Visual Doggy,
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When NO One Else Can Understand Me When Everything I Do Is Wrong You Give Hope And Consolation You Give Me Strength To Carry On, And Your Always There To Lend A Hand In Everything I Do That The Wonder The WONDER Of You And When You Smile The World Is Brighter YOU Touch My Hand And Im Queen Your KISS To Me Is Worth A Fourtune Your Love For Me Is Everything I,ll Guess I,ll Never Know The Reason Why You Love As You Do Thats Just The Wonder The Wonder Of You
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Old 11-30-2006, 11:18 PM   #5
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Thanks, sis. Thanks for reading as always, you guys
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Old 12-01-2006, 12:14 AM   #6
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Re: Mistress of Midnight

your welcome Doggy,
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Re: Mistress of Midnight

the tittle reminds me of the new zelda Twilight Princess
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i likee. a good mix of fantasy and reality
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Quote: (Originally Posted by nagpo) the tittle reminds me of the new zelda Twilight Princess
da goodness it would would,nt it
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