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Old 08-22-2009, 06:11 PM   #1
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till you showed me - plz tell me what u think

(c) Adam Parker 22/10/09

Verse 1:
My down state of mind
Led me to lead my life blind
To seeing what this life could be
But I was down and lost
I had fallen too far
I can't believe that this was me

Pre-Chorus
Happiness had left my eyes
Depression had surrounded my mind

Chorus
And I............
was near the edge of giving up
Till you.........
showed me, what this life could be
But I couldn't see any point to my life
I thought life would just pass me by
Till you showed me........

Verse 2
My demons are laid to rest
to better myself
I once feared what this life would be
And now my minds so clear
Inside there's no fear
I've left bedind what was once me

Pre-Chorus 2
Depression has left my eyes
Happiness now surrounds my mind

Chorus -

Other section
Please believe me when I say these words
Don't doubt me when I tell you this

Acoustic Chorus 2
And I was near the edge of giving up
Till you showed me who I could be

Chorus -

Ending
Till you showed me

You can listen to the song here if you like it's called "till you showed me": http://www.totallyunsigned.co.uk/members/1902/music.php
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Old 08-23-2009, 08:30 PM   #2
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Re: till you showed me - plz tell me what u think

My Demons Are Laid To Rest, To Better Myself , I Once Feared What This Life Would Be AND NOW My My Minds Are So Clear Those Lines Really Good Adparaiki I liked It
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