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Old 05-14-2006, 03:53 PM   #1
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Realms Of Thunder

forgive me father for I have sinned
again my hopes and dreams lie in the mud
noone knows how hard I tried
to wash these stains away
still again it haunts me
still again it confronts me

why are you and I
not under the bluest skies
what brings us here in the realms of thunder
maybe to fight a fight of honor
maybe to learn
maybe to fall

so far away you guard me
with all the odds against us
you are the one still with me
noone knows what love can do
but I know that somehow
I'll put my faith in you

I want to show you the waterfalls
where angels sing
I want you to know
that you are my knight
my spark of hope
in this endless night
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Old 05-14-2006, 08:54 PM   #2
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nice!......

"again my hopes and dreams lie in the mud
noone knows how hard I tried
to wash these stains away
still again it haunts me
still again it confronts me"
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Old 05-14-2006, 09:36 PM   #3
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great! i really liked it.
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Old 05-15-2006, 12:01 AM   #4
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Re: Realms Of Thunder

that was cool!
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Old 05-15-2006, 03:22 AM   #5
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Thanks guys!
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Old 05-15-2006, 09:51 AM   #6
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Re: Realms Of Thunder

Quote: (Originally Posted by bilal) nice!......

"again my hopes and dreams lie in the mud
noone knows how hard I tried
to wash these stains away
still again it haunts me
still again it confronts me"
haaaaaaaa thank you bilal....i dont have to quote those are my favorite lines as well...we always gotta be confronted wit something...or our days we not go right Amen*** Great Job Misseeker!!!
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