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12-28-2003, 07:19 PM | #1 |
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Tears of Joy
Sorry Dogstar "girls girls girls" didn't exactly come out in this one maybe next time! LOL you guys might notice by slight use of ripping off what are you going to do sue me? hehe Hopefully this makes you think and perhaps smile once or twice!
As we said goodbye to a friend My brother this was your life Is it selfish to wish you were here With us, not them please tell me this is not the end As we said goodbye Mixed streams ran down The gourges that represent our faces This salt gave rise to wine Friend here is a tribute to you It was a pleasure serving with you You were sitting amongst us Re-telling old stories, shedding tears of joy They are but a drop in the ocean As are our lives We are but grass That tomorrow forgets Reedem the days my son For the days are evil Where does your treasure lie? So as you sat amongst us Before your spirit left where you used to dwell Our tears came only from joy No ill words hidden for such a rightous man We know that if he knocked today The only words you would hear Well done with you I am well pleased Would this be true of us? What can we learn from you? You walked the narrow path Up the slippery hills We shall seize the day Not because we seek the lights Our master is not our name We all want to know our fate Our future lies in front of us But like my sister I can't read the map I don't believe in a god Who laughs at our misfortune Our path predestined Of this I am sure For even if these is a line in the sand Push, don't sit that you need to strive What is Paris Hilton doing? Frankly I don't give a damn Believe what you will That is your right But I choose to win So I choose to fight
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12-28-2003, 07:39 PM | #2 |
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LOL, Hide, that's OK ...
Nicely done, by the way. I especially like this part: So as you sat amongst us Before your spirit left where you used to dwell Our tears came only from joy No ill words hidden for such a rightous man
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cool thanks for that I think my favourite part is where I allude to the fact that girls can't read maps! LOL
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Heheh, I laughed at that part because I always have trouble reading maps. I've gotten much better over the years, but in my younger days, I couldn't find my way out of a paper bag trying to read a map.
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hehe i wasen't so sure if to include that part because i was tyring to make a serious point but you can't give up good jokes in the battle of the sexes! LOL
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LOL, oh, I know you meant it in a serious vein, but the mention of it made me think of me, which is what/whom I was laughing at .
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so how is boys boys boys coming along? LOL
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LMAO...not even a twinkle in my eye yet, but give me time, hehehehe...remember, I'm older...and maybe a little slower in the brain department .
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LOL use that lyrical genius to comical use we could unleash a monster!
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Great poem, hide. And don't underestimate Dogstar, she'll have you in stitches!!
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Wow hide that was very deep i loved it
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Your right thats true,,
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I liked that one a lot to
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thanks heaps too bad that actor dude already wrote that arsehole song i would have love to have written that! LOL
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