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With A Mouth Like A Shotgun and A Barrel Full of Hatred
With A Mouth Like A Shotgun and A Barrel Full of Hatred
let your words rot on your tongue with your mouth like a gun armed and dangerous sick and contagious shots go off, our bodies cave no one understands the gifts you gave gifts of lead and weightless conversation with no better act of betrayal than of penetration the body bleeds and out forms misery lead me not into temptation lead me not into damnation (for the words i take in vain just may leave others slain). |
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07-31-2006, 09:25 AM
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Re: With A Mouth Like A Shotgun and A Barrel Full of Hatred
it was fun to read it.........short but good......... thanks for posting dude!
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Re: With A Mouth Like A Shotgun and A Barrel Full of Hatred
thanks
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08-06-2006, 04:54 PM
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Re: With A Mouth Like A Shotgun and A Barrel Full of Hatred
I thoroughly enjoyed this poem. Well, I can see it derived from pain - I'm sorry about that. Overall, it is a great poem with lots of meaning and emotion.
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