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Old 02-08-2005, 04:00 PM   #1
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emotions free

Happiness overcomes me.
I run from the smile.
Fear rushes through me.
I let no one read me.
Anger embraces me.
I quickly put the flames out.
Pain races in me.
I hide it behind the walls.
Though the fear hidden deep.
Still within me.
Afraid to smile.
Scared of letting fear get me.
Afraid to unlease the anger.
Scared to face the pain.
Still holding up the walls.
Built around my heart.
Where emotions play and secrets decay.
Wont let anyone come within these four walls.
Barries not meant to be broken.
But someone is still trying to get in.
Scared to escape from these walls.
Someone still chipping and making a hole.
The little girl inside goes in the corner,
Sheads the tears that never cease.
Then when the light peers through.
Happiness renewed.
The light is the way out.
Choosing to take a chance.
She reaches her hand out.
Someones soft warm hand holds on to hers
and sets her free.
The walls crumble all around her.
All emotions finally free.
She looks at her rescurer.
Thanks for never giving up on me.
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The music in my head loud...
Joyful noises sound...
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Old 02-08-2005, 08:50 PM   #2
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liked it alot
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Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything
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Old 02-09-2005, 02:06 PM   #3
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have to say the brought a tear to my eye, was really nice.
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*And I know*

*You’re a part of me*

*And it’s your song*

*that sets me free*

*I sing it while*

*I feel I can’t hold on*

*I sing tonight*

*cause it comforts me*

"You laugh at me because i'm different, I laugh at you because you're all the same"


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Old 02-09-2005, 02:25 PM   #4
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Thanks for your kind words.Also making someone cry by reading my feelings lets me know im not alone that people really do care thanx again.
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