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Old 01-21-2005, 05:34 PM   #1
Ann Allusion
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Rapture "Rap"

Rapture “Rap”

It’s not pretentious
Just a fact
If you drive a car
With a fish on back
Your ticket’s paid
Locked up tight
It makes you “special”
In God’s sight

In case of rapture
This car’s unattended
Just fair warning
That I’ve ascended

I could stop dead
In my tracks
Won’t be time
Left to react
Once the process
Has begun
We’ll all leave
In unison

In case of rapture
This car’s unattended
Just fair warning
That I’ve ascended

Warmed the pew
Paid my due
So just between
Me and you…

In case of rapture
This car’s unattended
Just fair warning
That I’ve ascended

©2004
Susan D.
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In sleep he sang to me, in dreams he came
That voice which calls to me and speaks my name
And do I dream again, for now I find
The phantom of the opera is there...inside my mind

Christine/ Phantom Of The Opera


Abondon thought and let the dream decend....
Point of No Return/Phantom Of The Opera


You will forever remain the music
And I…the song you sing
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Old 01-21-2005, 09:36 PM   #2
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i loved it , it took a few believe or not For the fish on back, of the car to hit me,
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Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything
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Old 01-23-2005, 01:23 PM   #3
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...thanks, CS...glad you saw the humour in it...
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In sleep he sang to me, in dreams he came
That voice which calls to me and speaks my name
And do I dream again, for now I find
The phantom of the opera is there...inside my mind

Christine/ Phantom Of The Opera


Abondon thought and let the dream decend....
Point of No Return/Phantom Of The Opera


You will forever remain the music
And I…the song you sing
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Old 01-23-2005, 01:56 PM   #4
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haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa yes i did,
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Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything
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