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02-11-2009, 05:24 AM | #1 |
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My Old Friend
My Old Friend How easily we forget. Oh I’m sorry… Twas an honest mistake: Isolating you; leaving you behind Well you cant blame me for the way you feel, that’s not fair; A guilt trip I don’t have to take tho I layed the cement for the pathway No I will not call you to see if anything might be wrong with me And when I am painfully lonely, I won’t call up to say “wanna hang” Havent seen me for ages? Must be my fault for not showing up. I mean…you are not your brother’s keeper, right? How easily we set aside. Just had to let you go I mean I know you’re fragile, and I will still treat you kindly But I am who I am and you are so different I mean I don’t and shouldn’t have to spend time with everyone Must change for me. Out with the old, in with the new. All my circle of friends, sitting on your front porch Enjoying the goodness of community, and ultimately, friendship But its your front porch - You say you don’t set the rules for community, Though all my friends are on your front porch, wondering why they haven’t seen me lately .
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great visual and im in impressed very much indeed of how you pulled a piece like that off
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Thanks sis. Twas immensely personal. its kinda odd cos it goes from one stanza of the actual person, to a stanza of my opinion. sorta hard to read this one.
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Very touching and so sad, Sincirr. Well done.
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I know it very Alternative Indeed Like Cold Play it was hard one from every stanza to opening up the deeper reflections of persons people place times and things it was done perfect and i liked it very much i found it real easy to read
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Oh thats good sis
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ya know when i see something good or i just like deary my i go to extremes if your potery was lyrics in stuff I just Feel Tremendus acoustic power in this one Way To Go Great Job
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