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Yeah, beleive it, another poem
Deceit Inside
A giving heart is bruised again Just wanting to see good in all men But not all men seek what is right Many have fallen away and lost sight Regretting he tried his heart grows dim All he sees now is another mans sin Never again will he open his heart For all that’s in it has faded to dark The good in him was killed by another Something so sacred is lost forever He tried to hold on but couldn’t be touched Deceit in this world is just to much So maybe you’ll think before you deceive For what can deceit ever achieve
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"althought the names change inside we are all the same, why cant we tare down the walls and show the scar's were covering?"-Inside us All My stage is shared by many millions who lift there hands up high because they feel this, we are one we are strong, the more you hold us down the more we press on!- What If To them Im seen as different but that I cant control I know they couldn’t walk one step in my shoes Refusing to see inside is something that they choose And giving in to their hatred is something I refuse For the moment I give in is the moment that I lose Loosing is a risk that I just cannot take Cause if I loose it’s my heart that will brake- Falling Alone |
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05-21-2003, 08:18 PM
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thats a real good poem I love it, and all that u said is real true
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thanks SmEeKy
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"althought the names change inside we are all the same, why cant we tare down the walls and show the scar's were covering?"-Inside us All My stage is shared by many millions who lift there hands up high because they feel this, we are one we are strong, the more you hold us down the more we press on!- What If To them Im seen as different but that I cant control I know they couldn’t walk one step in my shoes Refusing to see inside is something that they choose And giving in to their hatred is something I refuse For the moment I give in is the moment that I lose Loosing is a risk that I just cannot take Cause if I loose it’s my heart that will brake- Falling Alone |
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Yet again another awesome poem Sam:P I really enjoy reading your poems
Thanks for sharing them with us!
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Sam I gotta tell ya, you're gifted, you're probably the only one who can describe what's inside of me...
"Although the names change Inside we're all the same Why can't tear down the walls? And show the scars we're covering" Everybody's saying they're special, original, that they can never find someone like themselves...Why can't we open our eyes and see the truth?? We humans have the same emotions but we react to certain situations differently!!!!!! We all felt hate in our lives, it's true to different things but the most important thing we felt the same emotion, does anybody here know what I mean??? maybe I'm just talking crazy.....
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Nah, Hotdoggie, you're not talkin' crazy at all!! I think I get it.
 Great poem Sam. It kinda reminds me of one of my songs, When Angels Fall.
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I feel what u are saying, hotdoggie
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