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Poem I wrote, Hope u like it
Just a poem I wrote, hope u guys like it,
Undeserved A tree holding penance undeserved by all Many deny but still they fall Loving them still he calls their name Refusing Him still refusing He came Searching for love overlooking its creator Still not knowing what they live for They cry to man but what does he feel All that’s inside just seeking to heal Just seeking to rest in all that’s right Wanting to hold on just wanting one light Maybe someday they’ll find all they need And see there’s a reason he came to bleed Not coming for self but in love for all Bringing us closer to hear his call
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"althought the names change inside we are all the same, why cant we tare down the walls and show the scar's were covering?"-Inside us All My stage is shared by many millions who lift there hands up high because they feel this, we are one we are strong, the more you hold us down the more we press on!- What If To them Im seen as different but that I cant control I know they couldn’t walk one step in my shoes Refusing to see inside is something that they choose And giving in to their hatred is something I refuse For the moment I give in is the moment that I lose Loosing is a risk that I just cannot take Cause if I loose it’s my heart that will brake- Falling Alone |
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05-16-2003, 05:37 PM
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hmmm...very deep..love reading what you write..keep up the good work..
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05-25-2003, 12:43 AM
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its kool
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05-27-2003, 07:25 PM
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Great Poem Sam! I Like Your Work
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05-27-2003, 08:29 PM
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I always love your poems Sam
 That one was very good and touching to me:P Thanks for sharing it!
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Oh I'm a wandering soul I'm still walking the line that leads me home alone All I know I still got mountains to climb on my own Enough To Let Me Go-Switchfoot |
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05-28-2003, 02:05 AM
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Sam, I think you don't need to know what I think about this one (or all your poems actually): superb, it's called "litote" in french, your poems are concise, small but still they say so much, very meaningful....
KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!
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05-29-2003, 12:45 PM
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Very good!!!
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very nice!
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What's so good?
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05-31-2003, 07:09 PM
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The poem was good...hello
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Oh I'm a wandering soul I'm still walking the line that leads me home alone All I know I still got mountains to climb on my own Enough To Let Me Go-Switchfoot |
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Very deep, but well written. Good job!
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Take Heed that YE not despise not one these littie ones for i say unto you that in heaven their angels do always behold the face of my father which is heaven for the son of man came to save that which was lost .....so it is not the will of the father which is in heaven that one of littie ones should perish for thouse of you who have been cut down by thouse who thout themeselfs......holier then tho thay shall be cut down .....for you our the greaset in the kingdome of GOD....MATT>18>10
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 ^Sam I loved your poem as usual it was awesome.
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07-28-2003, 12:53 PM
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sam Iliked your poem now try this one now know I that the lord Saveth His Anointed he will Hear him From his holy heaven with the saving Stength of his right hand THEY are brought down fallen but we our risen and stand up right WE may rise n fall but t IN the end will meet again LET THE KING HEAR US WHEN WE CALL
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it's time for you to shut the f*ck up :lol:
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