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01-20-2005, 10:42 PM
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rose petals
Red rose petals.
Soft and romantic. White rose petals. Simple and nice. Yellow rose petals. Bright and Strong. Pink rose petals. Dainty and pretty. Petals wrapped around a stem. A flower so simple but amazing at the same time. Its breathtaking. The brightness of colors. Its so beautiful. The petals soft the stem smooth. The fragrance takes me away. Today the petals begin to fall off. The rose begins to fade slowly. slowly away. Reminding me nothing here last forever. Petals all around me now. Beautiful and the sweet smells fills me up once more before I go. Rose petals.
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A good descriptive imagery poem. Nice.
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01-21-2005, 12:40 AM
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nice comparison...rose petals to life...
 enjoyed reading it.
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that was pretty
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Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything
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thank u all
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