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Old 08-14-2004, 11:33 PM   #1
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A famous Kevin poem, it sucks as usual!

I see your body, lifeless
Hanging before me
Knife in hand
Throat spewing crimson
Blood running from mouth
Into your heart
Looking into your eyes
I see no life inside
But tears chased by pain
Prying open your body
To reveal a broken heart
Beauty in its purest form
Soul escaping from body
I am in awe as you leave
I watch you fly to Heaven
And then plunge into Hell
Don't worry, my darling
My tears will drown out the sorrow.
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Old 08-15-2004, 11:31 AM   #2
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Hey sucks as usual!!!!!!!! i know u did,nt give this one a title so i didnt have anything better todo si i gave it one for ya!!!!! Throat Spewing Crimson Blood Running From Mouth in to your heart !!!! Awsome Line That Line is what inspired the Title
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Old 08-15-2004, 07:15 PM   #3
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WOW, that is some heavy visual stuff! Great job!
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Old 08-15-2004, 10:11 PM   #4
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Thanks much, hehehe... Just me messing around as usual. I've been writing a lot again and I got more up beat stuff then what I usually write. I'm sure all of you will enjoy it, atleast i hope. Me and Kim wrote one,but I dont know if I should post it because its up to her so maybe you guys will see it,maybe not. Welp, Im off. Much love
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Old 08-17-2004, 11:25 PM   #5
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I'm with Kerri on that wow
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All I know
I still got mountains to climb
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Old 08-18-2004, 08:47 PM   #6
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Thanks Julie
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