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Old 06-28-2004, 10:44 PM   #1
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hey guys i know my last poem was "goodbye" but i realize i cant say goodbye so enjoy.

ooh this one is called no more hoping.


Sometimes I sit and cry sometimes I dont know why.
But I'll get by today and tommorrow just try to live life.
even though my tears are constant so is my soul for I
know I'll go on I'll be ok in the end at least I hope,but
we all hope for the best,but why hope it's just our way
not too cope with whats going on hoping does no good
for what I am feeling there is no healing not today not
tommorrow all I have is this undying sorrow why can't I
stop crying why can't you set me free.
why can't you see how much you mean to me.I would die
for you thats how much I love you I wish you loved me too.
can't you see your apart of me.my heart is called to only one
you've spun a web of love around my heart there will be none
like you.no one to compare because we are the perfect pair
you and I we should be forever not like we are apart from
each other i refuse to go any further with my life I'd rather
die then say goodbye so i wont.Take my life for there is no
reason for me to live unless you and me go on and on.till
death do us part,till our very last breath,till God calls us home.
I will roam alone unless its you beside me.so i will never let go.
even though i know i should but i can't i know you probley dont
understand.But i remember every precious kiss,every hug, every
time you held me to you so close our hearts beat like one.
no one will ever come that close to me as you have.
so i wont say goodbye not now not ever i wish we could be
with each other again.
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Old 06-28-2004, 11:47 PM   #2
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Cant you see your a part of me, my heart is called to only one , you,ve have spun a web of love around my heart there will be none like u NO ONE COMPARES!!!! Killer Work Love the vibe, Love the feel, IT WAS A FEEL ALL, HR!!!!
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Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything
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Old 06-29-2004, 01:18 PM   #3
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thanx creedsister you rock!!yes this poem had alot of feelings i cant express any other way im the kind a person who keeps things bottled up inside so by writing i feel better so thanx for you kind words
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Old 06-29-2004, 01:22 PM   #4
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I know exacltey what that feels like,,,
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Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything
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Old 06-29-2004, 01:24 PM   #5
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Quote: (Originally Posted by creedsister) I know exacltey what that feels like,,,
you do thats cool i know its hard for me to say what i feel but way awesome to write it down
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Old 06-29-2004, 11:47 PM   #6
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Its up to the writer to write what they feel and not speak thats why we write its a must
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Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything
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Old 06-30-2004, 01:26 PM   #7
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very true creedsister
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Old 07-02-2004, 06:31 PM   #8
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Wicked HR! i loved it. i know iv felt that way but you really put it into words well. loved it!
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Old 07-02-2004, 07:13 PM   #9
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thank you so much its nice to know your not the only one who feels a certain way thanx i dont know what it was about you but i like talking to you and reading your poems thanx again!
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