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09-03-2003, 09:00 PM | #1141 |
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OMG, Kim, that ending has me literally in tears!! That was awesome!!! I especially loved the piano part and the piggyback part.
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Kim, I'm speechless. That was fantastic!! You are a great fantasy writer!!! Bravo!!
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Kim that was SPECTACULAR!!!!!! That was some of the best reading I have done in awhile on here!!!! I like the way your mind thinks!
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Thank you all I'm glad you liked it. Believe me I LOVED dreaming it up.
Oh and Jen my mind is a whole lot better than what it put in writting but because of the younger set in here I keep it PG Sheila the end was my favorite part too :P Teri thanks for the compliment. Gives me incentive to write more
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Awesome job, Kim (from the other Kim!) I felt like I was right there seeing all of it first hand, you write with great detail. Now we're getting going here ladies!!
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Thank you very much Kim I love the detail, it's what makes the story.
Now who else is willing to bare all ?
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OMG Kim, the detail in that. You are an awesome writer, you really are. Think about that long and hard (not Scott long and hard, your writing). You have descriptions that are so clear, you honestly put the reader right there with you. I keep saying on this thread, it gets my juices flowing. One day, I'll be gutsy enough to post. Great job Kim, great!!
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WhooHoo, LMAO, Joy!! Kim, I agree with everyone else, you're a great writer and I LOVE all the detail.
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I really think you should just take a deep breath and do it (write one I mean). After the first one it gets soooo much easier. I love reading everyone's fantasies! Thank you very much for the compliment I really do love thinking them up
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Got one in mind, maybe tomorrow...
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I hope so crest.
I'm listening to Bound and Tied right now so I could have a new one in the next couple of days too I just passed 200 posts
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You girls ROCK!!!!!
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Kim that was an awesome fantasy!!!!!!!! OMG
The ending was incredible! Made me cry
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Thank you so much Scottsmyman!
to all for the very encouraging coments!
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You're welcome, Kim. You've inspired me to be more detailed and creative in my next writing effort for this thread.
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