Continiuos Poem from Creed Members - Page 2

Aimee · 01-16-2004, 09:17 AM

In the darkness
this moment near birth
Soon my voice will roar
With the first light I see
On earth...
I will soar.

Aimee · 01-16-2004, 09:28 AM

Too weak to cry
Too strong to die
I’m sick of the world and all its Lies
Tears from the sky
Fall from the skies above
As the thought of mercy falls down
With the thought of the lies.
Inside I die
But lies will always be the reason
That tears fall from the sky
But I have learned why
The reason why the heavens cry.
It's just an ongoing clamber of raindrops on my outside porch,
An ongoing sound of dread, with no answers.
Raindrops echos inside my head
To remind me of the pain
Sometimes I feel I have lost more than I have gained
But for now the answers will remain the same
Nothing are they, not a sound, not a presence,
Not an act, the answers remain nothing.
Forever dripping into my soul
They rip and tear, they take their toll
They’re empty droplets,
Nothing more
They cant end sorrow and they cant be the cure
Dripping, drowning
Turn me around
Swirl my existence
Bury my crown
Drilling deeper
Endless hole
Bloodless keeper
Stare so cold
Darker,
Deeper,
Final hour near,
Send those eyedrops made of fear
gave them such fragile wings...
Send them up to heaven,
but heaven was just too high,
I watch them falter against the sky
They falter and fall as if they are ancients,
As if they know all about the world,
Yet they don't understand
They don't understand the journey we take,
As we walk through this land
The pain we all feel
That's written in the sand
I walk alone from were I stand
There’s no one there to hold my hand
So I will keep my voice silent as it makes no sound
In the darkness
This moment near birth
Soon my voice will roar
With the first light I see
On earth…
I will soar.

(Sounds good eh?)

Torn Signs · 01-18-2004, 10:32 PM

(does to me)

DangerousDan85 · 01-19-2004, 12:47 AM

sandwiches are beautiful
sandwiches are fine
i love sandwiches
i eat them all the time

creedsister · 01-20-2004, 01:53 AM

Quote: (Originally Posted by Torn Signs) (does to me)

me2

creedsister · 01-20-2004, 01:58 AM

you dont see me bleed you dont see me dye on the inside why do i even try must i turn my self inside out why must i stand in bewtween doubt

Torn Signs · 01-27-2004, 08:07 AM

Why must I for one second believe it may be possible, but then the chain snaps and pulls me back to reality? You don't see me weep over what has been lost. You don't see me suffer under all the pain I have sacrificed myself to. You don't see me stand between truth and doubt.

Torn Signs · 01-27-2004, 08:10 AM

Quote: (Originally Posted by DangerousDan85) sandwiches are beautiful
sandwiches are fine
i love sandwiches
i eat them all the time

They are big and small,
Juicy and fat,
These sandwhiches,
That I think about all the time.

creedsister · 01-27-2004, 11:15 AM

Quote: (Originally Posted by Torn Signs) Why must I for one second believe it may be possible, but then the chain snaps and pulls me back to reality? You don't see me weep over what has been lost. You don't see me suffer under all the pain I have sacrificed myself to. You don't see me stand between truth and doubt.

THAT WAS SHORT BUT SO TRUE AND IT WAS KILLER SORRY IM MESSING UP THE THREAD

Torn Signs · 01-27-2004, 07:40 PM

HELP-so confused on this thread!

WeatheredWoman · 01-27-2004, 08:00 PM

Quote: (Originally Posted by Torn Signs) They are big and small,
Juicy and fat,
These sandwhiches,
That I think about all the time.

So I waste my time,
with sandwich-dreaming
A sparkling wine,
A twist of lime,
A whisky soda,
hole in time...

creedsister · 01-27-2004, 08:30 PM

Quote: (Originally Posted by Torn Signs) HELP-so confused on this thread!

what else is new kim

WeatheredWoman · 01-27-2004, 08:32 PM

Just take your time,
to make up your mind,
Draw a line
or flip a dime..
Waiting for you

creedsister · 01-27-2004, 08:43 PM

I drew a line a long time a go a little stronger now i know how but i dont know when only time well tell it never lies

WeatheredWoman · 01-28-2004, 01:01 PM

When you're stuck in the middle,
can't solve the riddle...
Questioning: is there any hope in hell?
Know that time will heal,
So I guess time will tell...

01-16-2004, 09:17 AM	#16
Aimee USER INFO » Status: INK'ed Posts: 822 Joined: Sep 2002 Currently: Offline	In the darkness this moment near birth Soon my voice will roar With the first light I see On earth... I will soar. __________________ The capacity for passion is both cruel and divine. George Sand - 1834 Last edited by Aimee : 01-16-2004 at 09:27 AM.

01-16-2004, 09:28 AM	#17
Aimee USER INFO » Status: INK'ed Posts: 822 Joined: Sep 2002 Currently: Offline	Here is what we have so far... Too weak to cry Too strong to die I’m sick of the world and all its Lies Tears from the sky Fall from the skies above As the thought of mercy falls down With the thought of the lies. Inside I die But lies will always be the reason That tears fall from the sky But I have learned why The reason why the heavens cry. It's just an ongoing clamber of raindrops on my outside porch, An ongoing sound of dread, with no answers. Raindrops echos inside my head To remind me of the pain Sometimes I feel I have lost more than I have gained But for now the answers will remain the same Nothing are they, not a sound, not a presence, Not an act, the answers remain nothing. Forever dripping into my soul They rip and tear, they take their toll They’re empty droplets, Nothing more They cant end sorrow and they cant be the cure Dripping, drowning Turn me around Swirl my existence Bury my crown Drilling deeper Endless hole Bloodless keeper Stare so cold Darker, Deeper, Final hour near, Send those eyedrops made of fear gave them such fragile wings... Send them up to heaven, but heaven was just too high, I watch them falter against the sky They falter and fall as if they are ancients, As if they know all about the world, Yet they don't understand They don't understand the journey we take, As we walk through this land The pain we all feel That's written in the sand I walk alone from were I stand There’s no one there to hold my hand So I will keep my voice silent as it makes no sound In the darkness This moment near birth Soon my voice will roar With the first light I see On earth… I will soar. (Sounds good eh?)

01-20-2004, 01:53 AM	#20
creedsister USER INFO » Status: Tree of Wisdom Posts: 8,290 Joined: Oct 2003 Currently: Offline	Quote: (Originally Posted by Torn Signs) (does to me) me2 __________________ Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything

01-20-2004, 01:58 AM	#21
creedsister USER INFO » Status: Tree of Wisdom Posts: 8,290 Joined: Oct 2003 Currently: Offline	you dont see me bleed you dont see me dye on the inside why do i even try must i turn my self inside out why must i stand in bewtween doubt __________________ Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything

01-27-2004, 11:15 AM	#24
creedsister USER INFO » Status: Tree of Wisdom Posts: 8,290 Joined: Oct 2003 Currently: Offline	Quote: (Originally Posted by Torn Signs) Why must I for one second believe it may be possible, but then the chain snaps and pulls me back to reality? You don't see me weep over what has been lost. You don't see me suffer under all the pain I have sacrificed myself to. You don't see me stand between truth and doubt. THAT WAS SHORT BUT SO TRUE AND IT WAS KILLER SORRY IM MESSING UP THE THREAD __________________ Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything

01-27-2004, 08:00 PM	#26
WeatheredWoman USER INFO » Status: Shackled Hero Posts: 2,722 Joined: Nov 2003 Currently: Offline	Quote: (Originally Posted by Torn Signs) They are big and small, Juicy and fat, These sandwhiches, That I think about all the time. So I waste my time, with sandwich-dreaming A sparkling wine, A twist of lime, A whisky soda, hole in time... __________________ ________________________ ______________________________ Souls... they float like the memories I've opened, Go... and kiss all the butterflies I've broken, Sow... their wings to the coat of my misfortune, Grow... to reach the plains only I have spoken... The Path ~by~ ManMade God

01-27-2004, 08:30 PM	#27
creedsister USER INFO » Status: Tree of Wisdom Posts: 8,290 Joined: Oct 2003 Currently: Offline	Quote: (Originally Posted by Torn Signs) HELP-so confused on this thread! what else is new kim __________________ Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything

01-27-2004, 08:32 PM	#28
WeatheredWoman USER INFO » Status: Shackled Hero Posts: 2,722 Joined: Nov 2003 Currently: Offline	Just take your time, to make up your mind, Draw a line or flip a dime.. Waiting for you __________________ ________________________ ______________________________ Souls... they float like the memories I've opened, Go... and kiss all the butterflies I've broken, Sow... their wings to the coat of my misfortune, Grow... to reach the plains only I have spoken... The Path ~by~ ManMade God

01-27-2004, 08:43 PM	#29
creedsister USER INFO » Status: Tree of Wisdom Posts: 8,290 Joined: Oct 2003 Currently: Offline	I drew a line a long time a go a little stronger now i know how but i dont know when only time well tell it never lies __________________ Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything

01-28-2004, 01:01 PM	#30
WeatheredWoman USER INFO » Status: Shackled Hero Posts: 2,722 Joined: Nov 2003 Currently: Offline	When you're stuck in the middle, can't solve the riddle... Questioning: is there any hope in hell? Know that time will heal, So I guess time will tell... __________________ ________________________ ______________________________ Souls... they float like the memories I've opened, Go... and kiss all the butterflies I've broken, Sow... their wings to the coat of my misfortune, Grow... to reach the plains only I have spoken... The Path ~by~ ManMade God

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