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03-02-2006, 05:31 PM | #1 |
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a song i wrote...
Walking along a lonley street
I get struck down by the devils fleet Now he lays their next to me Telling me all kinds of things As he sticks his fork straight down through my heart He whispers all those naughty things of gold And women Ill ever need He promised them...but I just had to sit and think for awhile (chorus) You can take my soul, you can take my breath You can take my freedom but don't forget An eye's for an eye and soon you'll get what's comin' to you (end chorus) I've figured what I'm gonna do I'm gonna go down to Hell with you But not for the reason you had planned to So I grab my friends and there we go Now we see the Devils thrown We scream to him with our words of gold (chorus) You can take my soul, you can take my breath You can take my freedom but don't forget An eye's for an eye and you'll get what's comin' to you You can take my heart, you can take my life Please take me forever, but don't deny That an eye's for an eye and you'll get what's comin' to you (end) You will get whats comin' to you .................................................. ..............................
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03-02-2006, 05:47 PM | #2 |
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Re: a song i wrote...
i love it
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03-02-2006, 05:48 PM | #3 |
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thank u
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Re: a song i wrote...
that could have been the 11th song on my own prison!
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03-03-2006, 06:14 AM | #5 |
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Re: a song i wrote...
What a great song!
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Re: a song i wrote...
it was great i fell into the closing lines
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thank u all!!
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03-03-2006, 04:55 PM | #8 |
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thats the best complement i have ever gotten. thak u so very much
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