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12-27-2003, 05:47 AM | #1 |
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Haven’t found my fun today
Scrounging for some green to play Disappointed eyes turn gray Just another day to stray Mirror, mirror shatter please Reflection of an old disease Disappointed eyes appease Just another fruitless tease Haven’t made my daily pledge Art perfected on the edge Disappointed eyes they hedge Just another driving wedge Pull the plug on bended knee Someone hide it far from me Disappointed eyes must see Just another pointless plea Haven’t moved to change my ways Idle through a morning haze Disappointed eyes do glaze Just another rainy daze Broken down forever need Hounded by a hollow creed Disappointed eyes they bleed Just another soul to seed
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hey another good peice but i want to set you a challenge whether you take it is up to you. You write great introspective and dark lyrics much like Staley did but how bout the challenge that I'll take as a double dare. You've got to try to write something more airy fairy such as "girls girls girls" and see how it turns out. This will be hilarious! LOL
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LMFAO @ *girls, girls, girls*...in my case it would have to *guys, guys, guys*....lol...maybe like AC/DC's Big Balls or something ...I don't know, if I try to force it, it probably would suck, LOL...But, hey, I'll give it a shot at some point!
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yeah its not natural for me either but when i'm in a really good mood i'll do it and post it just for a bit of fun. LOL
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Well, I will take on that challenge when the right mood hits! And we'll have some airy-fairy fun ! Can't turn down a double dare!
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LOL cool there shall be no amazing introspective lyrics here you can only talk about girls/guys, waves and the occasional SVT! LOL
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LMAO! You are too funny, hide...I will do my best!
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Wow!!! That was awesome!!! Keep up the good work
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Thanks much, MrSeeker
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Another good one old gal
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That was really deep! I loved it!
I know what you mean man when ya gotta be in the right mood. I've tried to write poems in the wrong mood, they suck! I throw them in the trashcan out of embarrasment. (Note that I don't show them to anyone either!) I don't write when I'm not in the mood anymore! LOL If I did, I'd keep the trash industry going well! Usually to actually write one that's ok I have to stay up until the wee hours in the morning when I'm tired, and too stupid to judge what I'm writing! I might post one I did a few night's/mornings whatever ago. Never know 'bout me!
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Thanks, creed_defaultgirl! Btw, you shouldn't throw your stuff away even if you think it stinks. It's the process that's really cool and cathartic. Whatever you say/write is always worthwhile .
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Kerri another awesome poem! It's a little Maynard like if you know what I mean! ( can't stop listening to "thirteenth step"! LOL) I love reading your stuff!
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Hehehehehe, wow, thanks! I was probably inspired by him, since I've been listening to him NONSTOP ...
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Just pour it out whatever way it comes. Some of us cant write positive stuff. I never have been able to, but I think that's the way God wired me up cos the stuff I write helps people that just cant be positive and are looking for a reason to hang onto their faith. U cant fight who U R, but an acca dacca, airy-fairy, big-balls sonnet would still be a fun challenge...
Hey, perhaps like the name games, we could do a poem game! first line makes a statement, next post has to make it rhyme, repeat! Anyways, blah blah...What I planned to say was, another stroke of genius Dogstar!
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