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Old 04-13-2005, 12:09 PM   #1
Ann Allusion
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We notice this insanity
Referred to as technology
Destruction of humanity
Grows stronger every day

We’re told it’s for the better
Change the food …change the weather
When we’re gone altogether…
It won’t matter anyway

Eat the tripe they feed you
‘til it’s too far gone to undo
It’s all one big ol’ witches brew…
Let the grown-ups play

Seems we should be learning
It’s up us to be concerning
Ourselves with overturning
This decadent decay

We’re told it’s for the better
Change the food …change the weather
When we’re gone altogether…
It won’t matter anyway

©2005
Susan D.
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In sleep he sang to me, in dreams he came
That voice which calls to me and speaks my name
And do I dream again, for now I find
The phantom of the opera is there...inside my mind

Christine/ Phantom Of The Opera


Abondon thought and let the dream decend....
Point of No Return/Phantom Of The Opera


You will forever remain the music
And I…the song you sing
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Old 04-13-2005, 01:09 PM   #2
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that was so awesome a real home run I really liked it I mean wow that was good!!
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Old 04-13-2005, 01:25 PM   #3
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Yes So Did I ...It Would Be Nice If People Could Follow The Meaning ..Of The Holy Teaching Of The Anxiety And Gods Kingdom ..Liked It When We,re All Gone Is Dosent Matter Anyways ...
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Old 04-13-2005, 04:18 PM   #4
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Thank you both so much for your comments...

I'm a thinkin' it would make a pretty good song...
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In sleep he sang to me, in dreams he came
That voice which calls to me and speaks my name
And do I dream again, for now I find
The phantom of the opera is there...inside my mind

Christine/ Phantom Of The Opera


Abondon thought and let the dream decend....
Point of No Return/Phantom Of The Opera


You will forever remain the music
And I…the song you sing
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Old 04-13-2005, 06:30 PM   #5
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Heh, my kind of title, Ann. Nicely done, as usual. I can hear chorus in this verse all the way:

We’re told it’s for the better
Change the food …change the weather
When we’re gone altogether…
It won’t matter anyway

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Old 04-13-2005, 07:40 PM   #6
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exactly, dogstar...that's what i was thinking too...thank you for reading
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In sleep he sang to me, in dreams he came
That voice which calls to me and speaks my name
And do I dream again, for now I find
The phantom of the opera is there...inside my mind

Christine/ Phantom Of The Opera


Abondon thought and let the dream decend....
Point of No Return/Phantom Of The Opera


You will forever remain the music
And I…the song you sing
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