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07-17-2006, 08:42 PM | #1 |
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Black Gold
I haven't written in ages, but today I felt the urge. The fruits of my labored labor :
Black Gold The tainted chalice sears their soiled hands As they raise it up in shallow victory For all to see and bow accordingly The bullies ascend their pulpits As they thump their chests in earnest So haughty are the unmasked marauders They feign disdain for the blistering pain As they justify their deluded quest To be the kings of the bountiful hill Trampling resolve Wringing out the red Bite the rotten apple Chew until you’ve bled Itchy fingers trigger the gunslingers As they shred their knowing victims With a barrage of rhetoric worn thin The misguided lemmings take their places As they horde their buckets of black gold Chanting reason is treason in unison Trampling resolve Wringing out the red Feed the green disease Drink until you’re dead
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tottaly awsome, really sharp imagry,,
p.s cudo's for takin the name of a killer soul asylum song name too
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wow.......there wasnt one line in which i did.nt flip the dictionary......thanks for adding couple to my vocabulary.... apart.... wonderful iimages kept comin.....
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Thanks much, you guys
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Thank You Doggy for me that was a visual of what i see that taunts me i really liked the unmasked part DOGGY Loved It ....it relly help let out that Godly Anger that dont cease ...Nagpo wrote a few of his in a couple of threads that like AHHHHHHHH a nerve Relaxer Again Awsome Work!!! Doggy
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Thanks as always, Rocketqueen
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thanks as Always Doggy i love your use for words As always
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came back for this one.....
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holy crud this threads old
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12-23-2006, 01:25 PM | #10 |
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LOL, bilal
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Wow.......just wow......
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not really but its always up for topic, i love such topics even more so whatching trip over their own lies,untill they believe theme and fade so give,me their due,But WIPING you out was the masters master plan HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA AAAA, HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA, its all condradiction anyway ,
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[quote=bilal]came back for this one. j/k haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa, it was awsome good potery can make you feel so much better
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HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA ME TOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO, MUHEHAHAHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA,
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I KNOW IT But not a day goes by it does not cross my mine
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