Hello all,
I have recorded a song live on a webcam and uploaded to youtube. I would really appreciate feedback
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FQpnzK3W9ws
Verse 1:
My down state of mind
Led me to lead my life blind
To seeing what this life could be
But I was down and lost
I had fallen too far
I can't believe that this was me
Pre-Chorus
Happiness had left my eyes
Depression had surrounded my mind
Chorus
And I............
was near the edge of giving up
Till you.........
showed me, what this life could be
But I couldn't see any point to my life
I thought life would just pass me by
Till you showed me........
Verse 2
My demons are laid to rest
to better myself
I once feared what this life would be
And now my minds so clear
Inside there's no fear
I've left bedind what was once me
Pre-Chorus 2
Depression has left my eyes
Happiness now surrounds my mind
Chorus -
Other section
Please believe me when I say these words
Don't doubt me when I tell you this
Acoustic Chorus 2
My down state of mind
Led me to lead my life blind
To seeing what this life could be
And I was near the edge of giving up
Till you showed me who I could be
Chorus -
Ending
Till you showed me,