Thread: My First Poem
View Single Post
Old 07-17-2003, 07:39 PM   #7
HESTLA'S HONEY
USER INFO »
Status: Silence Speaks
Posts: 69
Joined: Jul 2003
Currently: Offline
Hey Sheila,

WOW!! I really like it! I like the way you changed the form. It flows much better now!! Great first poem!! Very good emotion and sense of depth!!

Keep writing!!

I hope to read more from you!!

~Honey~
__________________
My destiny is in the palms of my hands!!
Reply With Quote