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Grundge4eva · 08-22-2003, 05:30 PM

- three times the charm

love the frogs........

ok theabove is for balence, u laugh there, cos normallymy poems are either sick or depressed, so.... heres another one, lol. i got like 30 o them, dont worry only a few will be posted.

ok another one my arse, heres 2.

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Forgive me

I stand before u a broken man,
i believe i have done what i can,

please forgive me,

i run my hand through ur hair,
just to realise u were never there,

please forgive me,

i ran all night to see you,
what more can i do?

please forgive me,

the knife was there, i couldnt stop,
i see the blood run down my top,

please forgive me,

the thick pool of red forms around my feet,
all i wanted was to hear your voice say in words so sweet,

i love you always and,

i forgive you.

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Guardian angel

You saw me falling? How did u?
I ask these things every night before I sleep.
Before I pray my soul the lord does keep,
I see an angel in my mirror staring back at me,
The image in her eyes sets says a lot, you see?

The smiling beauty stares at me with so much love,
It’s hard to believe that she’s from above
Her golden blonde hair, her ice blue eyes
Her red cherry lips, she weeps then cries

She seen me falling, she seen me die,
My wings torn from my back I fall from way up high
I have the dream of falling, falling, the wind rushing through my hair,
Before my body hits the ground, open emotionless, my eyes stare
I feel the wings being torn from my back,
The pain spreads like fire to my skull, to my brain, it all goes black,
The sickening thud, the moist pop, I awake to find my body broken,
Shattered pieces here and there, my angelic voice cant be spoken,

Crimson splatters on the walls,
No one hears my voiceless calls,
I lie motionless for an hour or so,
I see the moon, and sun, come and go,
All in one second I gather my breath, and stand,
And I feel for my heart, it dissolves like sand
Without it I am not whole, I am a shell
No longer do I see the minions of hell,

I am a mortal now,
How can this have happened? My love was pure and fair, I wipe blood from my brow,
I see her face in the mirror see?
I see her face reminding of what was once me,
As I fall asleep
I hear the heavens weep,
For another comrade has fallen, another angel has died,
All because the fates have lied,
I was lucky I was treated well,
All my comrades have gone straight to hell.

And another night passes another legion fall,
Without a sound, and without emotion, they call
A soundless cry for help as they hit the ground,
A thousand blood soaked rooftops drowned,

So you say u seen me? How did you?
Did u see the wind turn me blue?
I was your guardian angel, and I needed you.

08-22-2003, 05:30 PM	#1
Grundge4eva USER INFO » Status: Illusion Posts: 8 Joined: Aug 2003 Currently: Offline	why do things never actually appear as written? - three times the charm love the frogs........ ok theabove is for balence, u laugh there, cos normallymy poems are either sick or depressed, so.... heres another one, lol. i got like 30 o them, dont worry only a few will be posted. ok another one my arse, heres 2. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Forgive me I stand before u a broken man, i believe i have done what i can, please forgive me, i run my hand through ur hair, just to realise u were never there, please forgive me, i ran all night to see you, what more can i do? please forgive me, the knife was there, i couldnt stop, i see the blood run down my top, please forgive me, the thick pool of red forms around my feet, all i wanted was to hear your voice say in words so sweet, i love you always and, i forgive you. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Guardian angel You saw me falling? How did u? I ask these things every night before I sleep. Before I pray my soul the lord does keep, I see an angel in my mirror staring back at me, The image in her eyes sets says a lot, you see? The smiling beauty stares at me with so much love, It’s hard to believe that she’s from above Her golden blonde hair, her ice blue eyes Her red cherry lips, she weeps then cries She seen me falling, she seen me die, My wings torn from my back I fall from way up high I have the dream of falling, falling, the wind rushing through my hair, Before my body hits the ground, open emotionless, my eyes stare I feel the wings being torn from my back, The pain spreads like fire to my skull, to my brain, it all goes black, The sickening thud, the moist pop, I awake to find my body broken, Shattered pieces here and there, my angelic voice cant be spoken, Crimson splatters on the walls, No one hears my voiceless calls, I lie motionless for an hour or so, I see the moon, and sun, come and go, All in one second I gather my breath, and stand, And I feel for my heart, it dissolves like sand Without it I am not whole, I am a shell No longer do I see the minions of hell, I am a mortal now, How can this have happened? My love was pure and fair, I wipe blood from my brow, I see her face in the mirror see? I see her face reminding of what was once me, As I fall asleep I hear the heavens weep, For another comrade has fallen, another angel has died, All because the fates have lied, I was lucky I was treated well, All my comrades have gone straight to hell. And another night passes another legion fall, Without a sound, and without emotion, they call A soundless cry for help as they hit the ground, A thousand blood soaked rooftops drowned, So you say u seen me? How did you? Did u see the wind turn me blue? I was your guardian angel, and I needed you.