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Creed7352 · 11-15-2005, 11:57 AM

Quote: (Originally Posted by uncertaindrumer) It is a poem. I think it is one of my best. I manage to avoid cliches and stupid rhymes. I also keep a theme throughout but is not to blunt and obvious. I think I finally got a couple of decent metaphors into this one.

Dang writing good poems/songs is hard...

ah, my bad..i thought you had said it was a song.

and yes, writing good poems/songs is hard.

11-15-2005, 11:57 AM	#12
Creed7352 USER INFO » Status: Faceless Fan Posts: 512 Joined: May 2004 Currently: Offline	Quote: (Originally Posted by uncertaindrumer) It is a poem. I think it is one of my best. I manage to avoid cliches and stupid rhymes. I also keep a theme throughout but is not to blunt and obvious. I think I finally got a couple of decent metaphors into this one. Dang writing good poems/songs is hard... ah, my bad..i thought you had said it was a song. and yes, writing good poems/songs is hard.