Hi my friends. I would really appreciate any feedback on the lyrics, song and recording performance.
I recorded the song in one take on a tape machine lol and then just plugged it into my pc and then put it to mp3 and uploaded it onto the site.
The song is here -
http://www.totallyunsigned.co.uk/textbooktakedown
and is called Still here with me. It is just me singing and playing guitar
The lyrics are
Verse 1 & 2 - haven't done lyrics for verse 2 yet sorry
I had braced myself for you to leave
But you came through for me
And I need you more than you know
Has life taken its toll
Pre-Chorus
On me - I know now you'd never leave
You and me - I know now we'll never be too far apart
Chorus
Can believe your still here with me
I thought I would just loose my mind
without you by myside
Other Section
Without you here i'd fall apart inside
that's why i'm still holding on to you
Cheers
Adam