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Old 03-11-2004, 10:33 PM   #2
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I liked It!!!!!!!!!!

Fall into this pit So Deep~~Feeling you holding me~Even though i cant see you. Feel Your Hands Under me eyes up on me~~ I thought It was}}} Deep. And Sweet. And I felt A lot Of hidden emotions In This One. Like The person it was written by. Is just dying To tell The Person its written too How He Or She Feels from Deep Inside!!! Which is like all poetry for that matter!!
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Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything
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