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Old 12-07-2003, 12:58 AM   #1
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12-6-03
Here is somthing i just wrote seconds ago!!!

"Murder!!! The sound makes my blood curtal!!! So beautiful.
The sound of you without air,
The thought of you holding on to one last breath,so cruel,yet,so fair.
So beautiful,whats beautiful to me is seeing you lifeless with blood splattered all over your body.

Your blood in my hands, so beautiful!!!
Your screaming voice, so beautiful!!!
Your life in my hands, so beautiful!!!
Your lifeless corpse, so beautiful!!!

Your haunting smile, tragic!!!
Your blinding beauty, tragic!!!
Your eyes,so dark and so deep, tragic!!!
Your voice like angels, tragic!!!

So tragic!!! Scream from the grave,which you tried to save!!!
Haunt the one that brought you the sun!!!
Corrupt the truth that we all knew!!!

So tragic,whats so tragic is that you were so beautiful on the surface,yet,
Beautiful as Hell deep down within"

What do you think? I am going to add more to it and stuff later,but i wanted to post this here quick. I dont even have it written on paper yet,so i am about to go write it on paper. Hope you like it!!!
p.s. This is screamed,so thats why its like it is.

*EDITED!!!! I just added to it*
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