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Old 06-11-2010, 04:54 PM   #3
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Re: Please give feedback on live recording

Quote: (Originally Posted by TrulyAmazing) well written indeed, your eyes follow me please let me be, i can,nt breathe your whatching my every move, smothering me judging whatching waiting ready to take control, do you think i have no mind of my own....bodly written well done... randomly it reminds me of the police hit, and bobby browns every little step i take somebody should have been whatching him ....when you get the rest of the lyrics just post,em up Rock On....

Aw thanks, I really appreciate your feedback on this post and many others.
What did u think of the actual song? i know it wasn't recorded that well
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