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Old 07-25-2003, 04:10 PM   #7
Sheila63
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Honey, I loved this poem too. I especially love the following part -

As I near
the edge
of this field
of grass,
I envision myself
emerging,
triumphantly,
through.

I reach out
and grasp
a small essence
of who
I once was.

I am ready
to shed
the empty shell
where my soul
resides.

Within, I know
some day,
I will discover
another part of me
to make my soul
complete.

I can really relate to the feeling in those verses. Great work!!
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I was selfish, but you still loved me
You gave the greatest gift of all
And you set me free

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