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Old 06-30-2004, 01:39 PM   #3
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Quote: (Originally Posted by Dogstar) Wow, Aimee...LOVE IT....

This part is wicked awesome:

Buzzing, blending,
Counting the days
Of hot
Sticky sweet
Lovemaking
In lemonade springs
With poets who
Have all gone before


Great visual !
With poets who have all gone before Whooooo thats the line i liked
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