[creedsister]

Quote: (Originally Posted by MrSeeker)

"He hopes to find the cure
Because he cant take it anymore
He's tired of feeling this way
To fight these demons each day
He's had more then any man can take
He feels he's about to break

He's in harms way
But its time to play
He takes out the knife
And takes his own life

Its sad to see a life end up like this
He may not realize it,but he will be deeply missed
It hurts to feel the weight of a shattered heart
To feel the cold passing of someone depart

She waste's her life away
to prostitution each day
All she needs is someone to love
But no one's ever around to give her enough
She found herself in a helpess situation
The guy had a knife and likes mutilation

She's in harms way
But its time to play
He took out the knife
And took her tourmented life

Its sad to see a life end up like this
She may not realize it,but she will be deeply missed
It hurts to feel the haunting voice of someone going away
To to feel their binding chanes that binded them each day

A man hide behind the mask he's made
He feels so alone and is always afraid
He is hollow with no one to love him
This lonely man hates the world he lives in
He wants out of this bitter,cold place
To feel the warmth of somewhere else upon his face

This lonely man is me
And he feels so empty
He's in harms way
But its time to play

Out of hope
Out of blood
Out of breath
Out of life
Im giving up,I cant take this anymore
Blood,it pours out onto the floor"


Ok,hope you like it! I feel it is my best yet. What do you think?

not a shocker but its really good and said most of all but awsome!!!!!!