Thread: Well why not post some lyrics, eh?
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Old 11-09-2005, 05:53 PM   #35
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Quote: (Originally Posted by MrSeeker) hmmm, it was ok. It wasn't anything I haven't already seen before. But dude, seriously, you are taking away from it piece by piece by trying to please everyone. That's not cool. You should never change something you wrote like that unless you plan to put it to a song, otherwise it's just lame. It's not really your work of art if you change it again and again.
It just loses it's meaning and it's raw emotion. Poetry needs that raw emotion.

Uncertain???...trying to please everyone???

LOL...

UNCERTAIN: post the other song you have...
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And once again, I cannot sleep
Walk out the door and up the street
Look at the stars
Look at the stars, falling down,
And I wonder where, did I go wrong.



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She puts the color inside of my world"
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